Issue 4 Page 12

I wasn’t joking on page 10 about her doing homework.  You get to read about it this week ;)

I know it’s just an aspect of storytelling pacing, but I always find it silly how the hero always happens to show up right when the villain’s doing his/her dirty deed and stops it.  Sometimes, there’s waiting around to do!  And besides, this book’s about the relationship anyway… stay tuned next week for what Johnny has to say!

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i assume the lack of sound effects means she’s got her phone on vibrate? Good, she may be green but at least she wouldn’t leave the ringer on during a stakeout.


Good catch, Neil. I was going to put a sound effect in there originally but then thought about it. I guess I could have put a bzzt or something, but a lot of silent/vibrates these days don’t even make much noise.


You are welcome. I should have the video up by next week. I will post the link here when it is up.


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